From 8e4522c2e5609e7bcc1a47e99abd1e5d19dd3344 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Gutbier <migu@cgan.de> Date: Tue, 17 Dec 2019 20:04:06 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] correct English --- guide/en_US/teams/gelb-team.adoc | 4 ++-- guide/en_US/teams/loc.adoc | 6 +++--- guide/en_US/what-is-an-angel.adoc | 2 +- 3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/guide/en_US/teams/gelb-team.adoc b/guide/en_US/teams/gelb-team.adoc index 10b9e50..f1d0bb2 100644 --- a/guide/en_US/teams/gelb-team.adoc +++ b/guide/en_US/teams/gelb-team.adoc @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ === Gelb Team -c3Gelb is making sure there is no congress epidemic. +c3Gelb makes sure there is no congress epidemic. -They ensure hygenic and prevent contageous infections which could ruin the congress for thousands of people. +They ensure hygienics and prevent contageous infections which can ruin the congress for thousands of people. diff --git a/guide/en_US/teams/loc.adoc b/guide/en_US/teams/loc.adoc index a6a0993..efba964 100644 --- a/guide/en_US/teams/loc.adoc +++ b/guide/en_US/teams/loc.adoc @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ === LOC [small]#(Logistics Operation Center)# -The LOC is getting all the stuff to the event location before the event and manage to get it out of the event location after the closing ceremony. +The LOC brings all the stuff to the venue before the event starts and manages to cart it off after the closing ceremony. -They operate the storage and keep look over all the heavy machinery needed. +They operate the storage and watch over all the heavy machinery needed. -Only go there if you're sober and aware of your surroundings as you don't want to be overrun by a liftfork. +Only go there if you're sober and aware of your surroundings as you don't want to be run over by a forklift. diff --git a/guide/en_US/what-is-an-angel.adoc b/guide/en_US/what-is-an-angel.adoc index c1343c7..99dbc72 100644 --- a/guide/en_US/what-is-an-angel.adoc +++ b/guide/en_US/what-is-an-angel.adoc @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ Nonetheless, please come to heaven and let us add your kid to any shifts as "n+1 Please note that there are a few exceptions to this rule: -* Children **are not allowed behind bars** due to the handling of alcoholic beverages. +* Children **may not work bar shifts** due to the handling of alcoholic beverages. * Children will be **denied access to the LOC** due to the heavy machinery and other work-related dangers in that area, so even if the shift itself may be appropriate, you will probably not be able to get there. In addition, if you want to bring your kids to a shift that needs a special angel type introduction, please ask the appropriate angel type supporter(s) beforehand if this is okay. -- GitLab