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guide/en_US/how-to-read-this.adoc

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ NOTE: This is a note. +
 
 TIP: This is a tip. +
 
-IMPORTANT: This is a important. +
+IMPORTANT: This is important. +
 
 CAUTION: This is a caution. +
 

guide/en_US/intro.adoc

 Dear reader, +
 
-Thank you for being part of the Chaos Community and taking the time to read up on how to participate. +
+Thank you for being part of the Chaos Community and taking the time to read up on how to participate! +
 
-This guide is trying to convey all neccessary information and quirks you might encounter, while helping at a chaos event. +
+This guide tries to convey all neccessary information and quirks you might encounter while helping at a chaos event. +
 
-As with any other guide being complete is almost impossible, so bear with our own ignorance and feel free to enlighten the mailto:angel-guide@c3heaven.de[authors] with any new knowledge you might come upon.
+As with any other guide, being complete is almost impossible, so bear with our own ignorance and feel free to enlighten the mailto:angel-guide@c3heaven.de[authors] with any new knowledge you might come upon.

guide/en_US/pack-list.adoc

 == icon:list[size=fw]  Pack list
 
-Participating as an Angel in the Chaos Community works best, if some equipment is present. While most tools necessary to perform a task will be provided to you, some items are personal and are best supplied by yourself. This is a pack list on what you might bring. The list is ordered by priority:
+Participating as an Angel in the Chaos Community works best if some equipment is present. While most tools which are necessary to perform a task will be provided to you, some items are personal and are best supplied by yourself. This is a pack list on what you might bring. The list is ordered by priority:
 
 [%interactive]
 * [ ] Refillable water bottle
 * [ ] Laptop or tablet (not only mobile phone)
 * [ ] DECT phone
-* [ ] Collapsable cup
+* [ ] (collapsable) cup
 * [ ] Simple Multitool
 * [ ] Lanyard
-* [ ] Power cord / euro-adapter
+* [ ] Power cord / euro adapter

guide/en_US/quickstart.adoc

-== icon:fast-forward[size=fw]  Quick-Start
+== icon:fast-forward[size=fw]  Quick Start
 
 [square]
 . Create yourself an https://engelsystem.de[angel system account]
@@ -14,6 +14,6 @@
   * Use https://c3nav.de[navigation] to find location
   * Arrive a little bit early
 . Rest for at least one hour
-. Repeat from step 6.
+. Repeat from step 6
 
 And always, **have a lot of fun**.

guide/en_US/radio.adoc

@@ -2,6 +2,6 @@
 
 In addition to the DECT telephones, handheld radios are used for communication purposes. They serve as backup at important points in case the DECT network fails and are also used for 1-n communication.
 
-You may find a radio at your shift. In this case please make sure that the battery is not empty, the correct channel is set and the device is loud enough for you to understand. Communication always starts with an initialisation phase with callsigns. Because most likley noone knows that you are the security-angel at the door, you should use "Entrance Glass Hall" as your callsign, not your real name or your nickname. For example: "Entrance glass hall for Secu" - "Secu hears".
+You may find a radio at your shift. In this case please make sure that the battery is not empty, the correct channel is set and the device is loud enough for you to understand. Communication always starts with an initialisation phase with call signs. Because most likeley no one knows that you are the security angel at the door, you should use "Entrance Glass Hall" as your call sign, not your real name or your nickname. For example: "Entrance glass hall for Secu" - "Secu hears".
 
 You can find more details on radio traffic at https://howto.c3roc.de.

guide/en_US/what-is-an-angel.adoc

 == icon:hands-helping[size=fw]  What is an angel?
 
-NOTE: Everyone who invests their free time into our events is an angel. +
+NOTE: Everyone who invests their free time in our events is an angel. +
 
-While the most obvious angels to most participants are the helpers staffing the cash desk, checking wrist bands at the doors or selling drinks at the bars, there are tons of jobs to be done "behind the scenes" that are barely noticable (or only become apparent if something goes wrong).
+While the most obvious angels to most participants are the helpers staffing the cash desk, checking wrist bands at the doors or selling drinks at the bars, there are tons of jobs to be done "behind the scenes" that are barely noticeable (or only become apparent if something goes wrong).
 
 All these people, from a new person, who sits at a smoker door for one shift at their first congress up to the experienced people in the organization team who do the high level planning in the months and weeks before the event - they all are angels.
 
@@ -10,30 +10,30 @@ All these people, from a new person, who sits at a smoker door for one shift at
 
 Being an angel also comes with some perks. Though we hope participating is enough of a reward, here is a list of things exclusive to angels.
 
-* Hanging out at heaven. Angel Hackcenter, using its wardrobe and chill out area.
-* Free coffee and (sparkeling) water.
+* Hanging out at heaven, Angel Hackcenter, using its wardrobe and chill out area.
+* Free coffee and (sparkling) water.
 * Free food for night shifts.
 
 === Rewards
 
 Having contributed a certain amount of time will also grant you access to:
 
-* Awesome warm vegan and vegitarian meals.
-* Sleeping arangements at nearby gyms.
+* Awesome warm vegan and vegetarian meals.
+* Sleeping arrangements at nearby gyms.
 * The famous limited™ Angel T-Shirt in congress design.
 
 [IMPORTANT]
 .Resources Limitations
 ====
-Please keep in mind that our resources are limited, not everyone might get a T-Shirt and meals and sleeping arrangements are also finite in number.
+Please keep in mind that our resources are limited. Not everyone might get a T-Shirt, and meals and sleeping arrangements are also finite resources.
 ====
 
 === Expectations
 
-IMPORTANT: Helping at our events also comes with some simple but important expectations towards you. +
+IMPORTANT: Helping at our events also comes with some simple but important expectations of you. +
 
 * Be on time to your shift or give heaven notice early.
-* Be well rested, sober and fed.
+* Be well-rested, sober and fed.
 * Be open-minded and friendly spirited.
 * Live our moral values:
 ** Be friendly to each other.
@@ -47,9 +47,9 @@ While we do not ask for your passport to check your legal age, we will probably
 
 However, every day is "bring your kid to work day", so if your kids are old enough to attend our events, you can bring them to most of the angel shifts as well.
 
-Please come by heaven and talk to our shift coordinators and we will arrange everything as needed. Of course, if your kids want to get an angel badge as well, they can get one and they will also be eligible for a t-shirt if they attend enough shifts.
+Please come by heaven and talk to our shift coordinators and we will arrange everything as needed. Of course, if your kids want to get an angel badge as well, they can get one and they will also be eligible for a T-shirt if they work enough shifts.
 
-NOTE: Sadly, we are currently not able to provide children's size t-shirts. +
+NOTE: Sadly, we are currently not able to provide children's size T-shirts. +
 
 Nonetheless, please come to heaven and let us add your kid to any shifts as "n+1" instead of simply singing them up since the required number of angels needed for a shift is calculated on the basis of adults.
 

guide/en_US/what-is-heaven.adoc

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ It's the place where you are getting marked as arrived when you start your angel
 Within the heaven you will find some of the perks of beeing an angel like the angel hackcenter or the water / coffee supply.
 
 Also there is some work done within the heaven.
-So called Standby Angels are waiting for spontaneous occuring tasks.
-At the heavens desk all the thousands of workhours needed to keep the congress running are managed and all of your angel ralated questions are answered.
+So called Standby Angels are waiting for spontaneously occuring tasks.
+At the heavens desk all the thousands of work hours needed to keep the congress running are managed and all of your angel ralated questions are answered.
 
-The heaven is also the best place to call when you have any problems with your shift like not appearing other angels.
+The heaven is also the best place to call when you have any problems with your shift, e.g. if another angel does not show up.